Planning Storyboard for my Apple Commercial

First scene: During this scene, I am going to film my Iphone in front of a black background. I will record this shot about 3 more times with 3 different versions of the same Iphone. This is going to give the audience a better understanding of the variety of colors we have. As this is happening, the phone will be migrating up to display the front of the screen. Second Scene: In the next scene, the Iphone is going to make a 360 degree turn showing all angles of the device. I am going to implement a voice over where I describe the exterior features of the Iphone while bullet points will show up in the background. This is going to introduce the important information regarding the device, and using the art of persuasion. Third Scene: The third scene is going to transition into my backyard, where I show of the camera's quality and ability. I am going to be standing in front of my lake with the sunset in the background, taking a video of the nice view, whi...